A story Im starting out Please Read and Post opions
I am formulating a story. In my story there are two groups of people. The Faras (a race of nymth like beings with dragonfly wings live in tree top villages eat fruits and various tree dwelling animals very social the females hair is long and usally blue, red or yellow in hue eyes are almost always green or blue males hair is normally brown or black eyes are allways blue all are usally tall fair skined and elf like ears and facial features many females wings have a glowing like ora to them males wings are clear) and the Naras ( a race of anphibic creatures in behavior not apperance they live in dry and moist places similar to mermaids but without the tails their skin is a sea foam color hair the shade and consitancy of seaweed they have large eyes and are excenlent swimers of course many have webed fingers and toes in the water and sapian like hands and toes on land they eat an abundece of shellfish and low growing fruits males are generally 5"5 to 6'5 females 5' to 6' they also have elfan features) tell me what you think and any ideas you have for a possible plot
quote:Originally posted by fenkashi Screw your opinions, they are not relevant ^^.
02.28.2005, 12:35 AM
the_baron's_girl
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A Plot!! With thoughs Characters!?
Wow. . .thoughs are some weird creatures. . .usually when I make up creatures I make the plot first then the people or in this case creatures. . .but what it sounds like is you have very limited plot ideas with these creatures. . .most likely they'll end up fighting for some reason. . .not very original if ya ask me. . .
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02.25.2005, 04:17 PM
A Plot!! With thoughs Characters!?
