1:16 and 3:20 sounded strange. I noticed that you changed the tempo a few times during the piece, but at these two points, the long pause was rather glaring. Also, the last twenty seconds felt dragged out, or was too monotonous.
Besides that, I think it was a wonderful piece. Loved it.
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