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KYLIN LAYA
Susuwatari
Registration Date: 02.17.06
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02.17.2006, 09:14 AM |
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Jiji
Oldie newbie
Registration Date: 01.15.05
Location: Downtown Koriko
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Hi Kyrin!
Your article is quite nicely written and delivers a subtly poetic feeling. I especially like the opening and ending lines. Yet I think it will be much better if you can include some personal comments, instead of providing a polished summary of the movie alone. Keep up!
By the way, please do try your best to write in English. This is an English forum site after all. There are people from quite a number of countries, and English is the only international language that everyone here understands. Undoubtedly second language accquisition is no easy task. Yet, with continuous practice, you can certainly improve a lot.
To me English is also a second language. My English had been quite pathetic (Grade F in English exam, special remedial class treatment) until I got a computer with an internet connection. It was since then that I have been trying to chit-chat with the native-speakers in forums like this. I have to say their effects on my improvement is remarkable.
Anyway, hang around and don't be afraid to chat with the others in English.
P.S. Are you from Beijing?
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02.17.2006, 01:43 PM |
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E_Hakki
Ohmu
Registration Date: 12.29.05
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02.18.2006, 11:51 AM |
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KYLIN LAYA
Susuwatari
Registration Date: 02.17.06
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Thank you,Jiji,I felt so happy after I read your reply.
Paley was right.There are many Chinese friends here.I worried about nobody here can read Chinese at one time,but my misgivings is very excrescent.I'm grafidied about it.
I want to thank you for your advice,it's so useful.Sometimes I will forget how to write or what to write,I need a friend who can coach me with my writing.Now I believe all the peaple in this forum can help me.The most important reason is we have the resonance.
We all love Miyazaki's film.And so do I.
ps.I think this place is really very helpful to practise my English.Thank you,E_Hakki!
__________________ In the moonlight I felt your heart Quiver like a bowstring's pulse In the moon's pure light, you looked at me Nobody knows your heart
When the sun is gone I see you Beautiful and haunting, but cold Like the blade of a knife, so sharp and so sweet Nobody knows your heart
All of your sorrow, grief and pain Locked away in the forest of the night Your secret heart belongs to the world Of the things that sigh in the dark Oh the things that cry in the dark
---The Princess Mononoke
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02.24.2006, 06:38 AM |
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Tresi
Tanuki
Registration Date: 01.22.06
Location: Germany
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Hi KYLIN LAYA!^^
Just wanted to tell you´that your English is very good!
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03.20.2006, 09:26 AM |
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